good but...
get your facts straight.
Before the Enola gay came another Plain, it went over Hiroshima, and alarms went off. After it left the people came out of the bomb shelter, and resumed life, then the Enola Gay came and dropped "little boy". and they dropped it on a T-shapped bridge.
And you should quoted the pilot saying "What have we done?"
and also, i don't like the way that you made japan look like really ancient. it was in the 1940's not 1840!
but over all it was a good flash